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0:00 Intro
0:49 Good Dialogue
2:23 Bad Dialogue
2:42 On The Nose Dialogue
5:06 Melodramatic Dialogue
8:08 "As You Know, Bob" Dialogue
10:52 Forced Poetry Dialogue
12:59 Wooden Dialogue
15:27 Outro

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