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⏲ TIMESTAMPS:

00:00 Introduction
00:07 Time travelling reactions
01:01 Double Negatives
01:45 Incorrect adjective order
03:49 Overindulging on adjectives
04:49 Bubble wrap words
08:55 Incorrect adjective pacing
10:38 Repetitive sentence lengths
12:50 Weird anatomy
14:19 Sentence splices
16:07 Passive voice
18:22 The Ending Bias
19:37 Beige diction
21:48 Anachronistic words
24:25 Ignoring the Oxford comma
25:35 Thoughtless adverbs
27:00 Generic verbs
28:08 Thesaurus brain
29:31 Silly dialogue tags
31:40 Describing what isn't happening
32:35 Weasel words

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